Here’s another try, totally re-do! Richard went through your outline the best he could! I didn’t edit much, and I didn’t include any text etc. because I want to see if we are anywhere close to ok before I spend more time on it!!!
Here’s the first video. Unfortunately, we used totally different angles and shirts and can’t cut and paste scenes. We would re-record some tomorrow and get it close enough to today’s work to cut it in, I think.